ret gramatik i engelsk

@re you online?




I am not a newbie on the internet. I have been used the net for many years. I remember the first time I used the net, I was about 11 years old. A very famous homepage called www.netstationen.dk it is a chat program. This chat program was not like all the other chat programs where you just write some things down and an other person answers you. This was a 3D animation. Today I  also use the net to chat on mIRC. But today mostly am using it to play whit other online. The most famous game I play is Counter-strike. It is an
Action game. The Counter-terrorists fights against terrorists. The terrorists have a bombe to plant on the bomb site and then the Counter-terrorist has to diffuse the bomb, or the Counter-terrorist has to rescue the hostage from the terrorists. You can use the net to every thing; ex you can search on www.studinet.dk about school work, and stuff like that. With out the net, the world has to take a break for a couple of years, because all work all the robots and some thing like that have to come for about 5-10 years later. Today I am not buying things in shops more almost on the net. And that’s the way all things go, for about 5 years.
You dont have to go to work, you can use your computer to work at. And that’s also because more and more people are being fat. My opinion about people is home and makes noting. That’s make me ill. Wee see, every day in America, people who’s dieing because they dont do things so they are being to fat.  If wee do not take care of it, we are going to look like Americans in the future.



Indsæt selv linie skift, men husk at tjekke for store bogstaver ved linieskiftet...

Har rettet for stavefejl som du bad om. det grammatiske har jeg ikke rørt meget ved :)

:D

linien "That’s make me ill." skal rettes til "That makes me ill"

okay thX :D

wee=we

I am not a newbie on the internet I have used the Internet for many years. I remember the first time I used the net I was about 11 years old. I visited a very famous homepage called www.netstationen.dk (it is a chat program). This Chat program was not like all the other chat programs where you just write something down and another person answers you. This was a 3D animation. Today I also use the net to chat on mIRC. But today I am mostly using it to play with others online. The most famous game I play is Counter-strike it is an Action game. The Counter-terrorists fights against terrorists. The terrorists have to plant a bomb. When the bomb is planted the Counter-terrorists have to diffuse the bomb, or the Counter-terrorists have to rescue the hostages from the terrorists. You can use the net for every purpose; i.e. you can search on www.studinet.dk about school work and stuff like that. Without the net the world have to take a brake for a couple of years, because all work and all the robots and something like that have to come for about 5-10 years later (?). Today I am not buying things in shops - almost everything i buy is from the net. And that’s the way all things go, for about 5 years You will not have to go to work, you can use you computer to work with. And that’s the reason why
more and more people are becoming fat. Thats my opinion about people who remain at home and make nothing. It makes me feel bad. We see every day in America people who are dying because of obesity. If we not take care of it we are going to look like Americans in the future.

Jeg har rettet i det men dine pointer osv. har jeg, når de har været uklare, forsøgt at gøre forståelige

Mvh

/Christian

hovsa  jeg kom til at ændre break til brake ... hahaha det er til gengæld helt forkert! :P

Ved ikke om det er 100% rigtig, men der er vel andre der kigger det igennem... Jeg har frit rettet fejlene, men det du mener er kommet med... btw det der med at man kan gå ind på studienet og hente opgaver er måske ikke så fedt at skrive i en stil, hvis det ellers er en stil :)

i teksten har jeg smidt en parantes ind med noget dansk tekst, hvor der er en rettelse, jeg ikke er sikker på.

@re you online?

I am not a newbie on the internet. I have used the net for many years. I remember the first time I Used the net. I was about 11 years old. A very famous homepage called www.netstationen.dk which is a Chat program. This Chat program is not like all the other chat programs where you just write something down and an other people answer you. This is a 3D animation.
Today I also use the net to chat on mIRC. But today I am mostly using it for playing with other people online.
The most famous game I play is Counter-strike which is an action game. The Counter-terrorists fight against terrorists. The terrorists have a bombe to plant on the bomb plash (tror du mener place - spiller ikke så meget CS) and then the Counter-terrorist have to diffuse the bomb, or they have to rescue  the hostage from the terrorists.
You can use the net for everything. As an example you can search on www.studinet.dk for school work and stuff like that.
Without the net the world has to take a huge step backwards, because all work, all the robots and things like that would be delayed about 5-10 years.
Today I am not buying things in shops, but mostly on the net. And that is the way the world develops. In about 5 years you dont have to go to work. You can use you computer to work with at home. That is the reason why more and more people are getting fat. People sitting home doing noting make me sick.Every day we see people in America dieing because they dont do anything. So they are getting fat.
If we we do not watch out we will look like the american people in the future.

fik ikke lige smidt den igennem min grammatik og stavekontrol... fandt lige 4 fejl:

@re you online?

I am not a newbie on the internet. I have used the net for many years. I remember the first time I Used the net. I was about 11 years old. A very famous homepage called www.netstationen.dk which is a Chat program. This Chat program is not like all the other chat programs where you just write something down and another people answer you. This is a 3D animation.
Today I also use the net to chat on mIRC. But today I am mostly using it for playing with other people online.
The most famous game I play is Counter-strike which is an action game. The Counter-terrorists fight against terrorists. The terrorists have a bombe to plant on the bomb plash (tror du mener place - spiller ikke så meget CS) and then the Counter-terrorist have to diffuse the bomb, or they have to rescue the hostage from the terrorists.
You can use the net for everything. As an example you can search on www.studinet.dk for school work and stuff like that.
Without the net the world has to take a huge step backwards, because all work, all the robots and things like that would be delayed about 5-10 years.
Today I am not buying things in shops, but mostly on the net. And that is the way the world develops. In about 5 years you don’t have to go to work. You can use you computer to work with at home. That is the reason why more and more people are getting fat. People sitting home, doing noting, make me sick. Every day we see people in America dieing because they don’t do anything. So they are getting fat.
If we do not watch out we will look like the American people in the future.

kvadratrodenaf1:... Din stavekontrol fandt dog ikke den fejl som togsverd1985 ovenover undgik. I trediesidste linie skal der stå dying i stedet for dieing.

jep :)

Rettede et par stavefejl og nogle store bogstaver til små...

@re you online?

I am not a newbie on the internet. I have used the net for many years. I remember the first time I used the net. I was about 11 years old. A very famous homepage called www.netstationen.dk which is a chat program. This chat program is not like all the other chat programs where you just write something down and another people answer you. This is a 3D animation.
Today I also use the net to chat on mIRC. But today I am mostly using it for playing with other people online.
The most famous game I play is Counter-Strike which is an action game. The counter-terrorists fight against terrorists. The terrorists have a bomb to plant on the bomb place and then the counter-terrorist have to defuse the bomb, or they have to rescue the hostage from the terrorists.
You can use the net for everything. As an example you can search on www.studinet.dk for school work and stuff like that.
Without the net the world has to take a huge step backwards, because all work, all the robots and things like that would be delayed about 5-10 years.
Today I am not buying things in shops, but mostly on the net. And that is the way the world develops. In about 5 years you don’t have to go to work. You can use your computer to work with at home. That is the reason why more and more people are getting fat. People sitting at home, doing nothing, make me sick. Every day we see people in America dying because they don’t do anything. So they are getting fat.
If we do not watch out we will look like the american people in the future.

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