Avatar billede jurij Nybegynder
24. oktober 2004 - 23:13 Der er 5 kommentarer og
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Engelsk oversæt!

I FÅR 200 POING!
Jeg brugte 2 min(løgn) på at oversætte en tekst! Er der ikke nogen der lige kan tjekke den for åbenløse fejl!

Der er dumme fejl i fordi skrev den hurtigt, men er der ikke en der er lidt god til engelsk?



I must have been tree or fore years old. Not more.
The wave caught me. I dint any longer see the birds in the air, the children on the beach, or my mother, who was waiting on the beach. Then the wave returned me to the light and the sky and the sand. I rose og ran quikly to my mother.
She dried me with a towel, until I felt the heat coming to my body.
She said: “Lay down on the towel”
She took another towel, a blue one, that I havent seen before.
“Take your sweater on. The sun is gone.”
I obeyed. While I took my close on, I was wathing the waves, they rose and fell like rows of drunken men.
It was in September. There were not many people. Did I feel that the autum had come. Or was it because the children stopped playing and sat down? They dint like the wind that touched the sand and made it  fly away.
Maybe I knew that the summer died that that day
Avatar billede htmlkongen Novice
24. oktober 2004 - 23:23 #1
I must have been tree or fore years old. Not more.
The wave caught me. I didn’t any longer see the birds in the air, the children on the beach, or my mother, who was waiting on the beach. Then the wave returned me to the light and the sky and the sand. I rose and ran quickly to my mother.
She dried me with a towel, until I felt the heat coming to my body.
She said: “Lay down on the towel”
She took another towel, a blue one that I haven’t seen before.
“Take your sweater on. The sun is gone.”
I obeyed. While I took my close on, I was watching the waves, they rose and fell like rows of drunken men.
It was in September. There were not many people. Did I feel that the autumn had come? Or was it because the children stopped playing and sat down? They dint like the wind that touched the sand and made it fly away.
Maybe I knew that the summer died that that day

Nu er de værste fejl taget som du sagde ;)
Avatar billede htmlkongen Novice
24. oktober 2004 - 23:25 #2
four*
didn´t*

Var lige et par åbenlyse mere :)
Avatar billede htmlkongen Novice
24. oktober 2004 - 23:29 #3
*three ;)
Avatar billede basementjack Nybegynder
24. oktober 2004 - 23:35 #4
Således( det bliver ikke bedre uden den danske tekst;) ):

I must have been three or four years old. Not older.
The wave caught me. I did no longer see the birds in the sky, the children on the beach or my mother, who was waiting on the beach. Then the wave returned me to the light and the sky and the sand. I rose and ran quickly to my mother.
She dried me with a towel, until I felt the heat coming back to my body.
She said: “Lay down on the towel”
She took another towel, a blue one that I haven’t seen before.
“Take your sweater on. The sun is gone.”
I obeyed. While I took my clothes on I was watching the waves, they rose and fell like rows of drunken men.
It was in September. There were not many people. Did I feel that the autumn had come? Or was it because the children stopped playing and sat down? They didn't like the wind that touched the sand and made it fly away.
Maybe I knew the summer had died that day.
Avatar billede jurij Nybegynder
25. oktober 2004 - 11:43 #5
Der er kun et svar så htmlkongen du får poing, men hvis basementjack du gerne vil have poing kan jeg oprette en ny tråd! Hvis man må det. Du har jo oversat hele teksten.

Jeg skrev teksten meget hurtigt og uden automatisk retteordbog.
Avatar billede jakoba Nybegynder
26. oktober 2004 - 08:39 #6
Take your sweater on          bør være:  Put your sweater on
While I took my clothes on    bør være:  While I put on my clothes
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