Avatar billede jokn Nybegynder
19. september 2001 - 18:02 Der er 6 kommentarer og
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datid!

138 point til den der først omskriver dette til datid... altså: så kom, og så gjorde hun, og derefter og blablabla :)

Summery of the story \"Uneasy Home-coming\"

Connie was on her way home from her holiday, and her husband was on a business trip at the time. She had a feeling of fear and uneasiness, when she was sitting in the taxi. She saw shadows and movements outside her house. After she has goes inside she\'s turning on the refrigerator and the water. She goes outside in the garden and sees that it looks like when they left it. She goes nervously back in the house. She feels for the switch and she gets relief when the light gets on. She\'s now so afraid and scared, that she can\'t get herself to go upstairs. She calls Mrs. Winston. Mrs. Winston is older than Connie, but that doesn\'t matter now, she needs to talk with someone. She needs comfort. But, Mrs. Winston tells her that there have been some burglaries and the burglar has beaten up Mr. Field, because he interrupted the burglar. When she hangs up, she gets the feeling of being sick. She takes a suitcase and starts for the stairs. She gets in the bedroom. There was ashtray on the dressing table. Her muscles turn to stone. Her blood run cold, she tilted the chair behind her. She looks under the bed and see an object, which is strange. After a very long time she drags it out, it\'s a bag filth with cameras, watches and rings. She knows that it\'s stolen, because she knows that some of the things belong to Sally Hamilton. Connie turns out all the light, so that the burglar can\'t see that she\'s home. She also locks all the doors. She notices that a window in the pantry is missing a piece, so someone can reach in and unlock. She\'s sitting at, the phone and suddenly she hears a soft whisper of footsteps in the kitchen. Her blood runs cold again. She sees the light from a torch on the floor. She recognise him and she wants to scream, she now knows that he\'s hunting her. She crept out the backdoor very carefully. She sees the motorcycle and sets it on fire. The burglar comes out and is trying to put out the fire, with his gloves, but that is impossible. The fire engines and other cars come up the road. She begins to cry, because of all the terror she have been feeling. But she was most sorry for Mrs. Winston, because she is the mother to the burglar.

Deadline er kl 8.00!

Mange tak for hjælpen :)
Avatar billede cpufan Juniormester
19. september 2001 - 18:16 #1
Connie was on her way home from her holiday, and her husband was on a business trip at the time. She had a feeling of fear and uneasiness, when she was sitting in the taxi. She saw shadows and movements outside her house. After she has gone inside she turned on the refrigerator and the water. She went outside in the garden and saw that it looked like when they left it. She nervously went back in the house. She felt for the switch and she got reliefed when the light got on. She then were so afraid and scared, that she cuoldm\'t get herself to go upstairs. She called Mrs. Winston. Mrs. Winston were older than Connie, but that didn\'t matter then, she needed to talk with someone. She needed comfort. But, Mrs. Winston told her that there had been some burglaries and the burglar had beaten up Mr. Field, because he interrupted the burglar. When she hanged up, she got the feeling of being sick. She took a suitcase and started for the stairs. She got in the bedroom. There was ashtray on the dressing table. Her muscles turned to stone. Her blood run cold, she tilted the chair behind her. She looked under the bed and saw an object, which was strange. After a very long time she draged it out, it was a bag filth with cameras, watches and rings. She knew that it was stolen, because she knew that some of the things belonged to Sally Hamilton. Connie turned out all the light, so that the burglar couldn\'t see that she was home. She also locked all the doors. She noticed that a window in the pantry was missing a piece, so someone could reach in and unlock. She was sitting at, the phone and suddenly she heard a soft whisper of footsteps in the kitchen. Her blood ran cold again. She saw the light from a torch on the floor. She recognised him and she wanted to scream, she then knew that he was hunting her. She crew out the backdoor very carefully. She saw the motorcycle and sat it on fire. The burglar came out and was trying to put out the fire, with his gloves, but that was impossible. The fire engines and other cars came up the road. She began to cry, because of all the terror she had been feeling. But she was most sorry for Mrs. Winston, because she was the mother to the burglar.

Avatar billede cpufan Juniormester
19. september 2001 - 18:20 #2
Ups første linie...

Connie was on her way home from her holiday, and her husband were on a business trip at the time
Avatar billede oersted Novice
19. september 2001 - 18:25 #3
er husband ikke ental ?

+ Her blood ran cold

+ She went into the bedroom. There was an ashtray..

der er vist flere...
Avatar billede jokn Nybegynder
19. september 2001 - 18:31 #4
tak cpufan! det er ok, jeg skal nok selv rette de sidste små fejl ;-)
Avatar billede jokn Nybegynder
19. september 2001 - 18:37 #5
hvad hedder \"go\" i datid?
Avatar billede mystical Nybegynder
19. september 2001 - 18:43 #6
went
Avatar billede jokn Nybegynder
19. september 2001 - 18:55 #7
ok :)
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