Avatar billede mini-me Nybegynder
15. juli 2003 - 10:56 Der er 5 kommentarer og
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Proofreading - Anyone?

Er der nogen der vil læse korrektur på nedenstående?

What is CMS?  Content Management Systems, maybe better know as CMS is a tool used to control content – More specified the content on a webpage. A Content Management System makes it easy to handle, publish, update or remove content on the webpage.  A Content Management System makes it possible, for people without proper knowledge to internet technology; HTML, programming etc. to maintain text, pictures and much more on a webpage. With a CMS is possible for the secretary, the manager, sales consultant basically everyone who has access to the company’s web-site, and are provided with a password and username, can take care of the daily update and in this way the company can have a up to date dynamic web-site. the work with publishing and updating content can with a CMS also be divided among certain  fields of responsibility in a Company. In this way the Company do not have to have expenses to an extern web-bureau.  The functionality or the programming on the webpage is bought as a part of the CMS solution, and therefore it is not necessary to program a new CMS solution from scratch, to the individual Company. The functions are pre-programmed, in what we could call, building blocks, which just get linked on.  In development this saves – in considerably extent – both expenses and time.  With a CMS you get, what you call a dynamic webpage. The content changes in time when the company gets new products or takes new initiatives. The company is no longer depending on, when the web-bureau has time to update the webpage. The content can change from week to week, day to day or even second to second.  CMS is a help to update a webpage. It is user friendly, future compatible and a very low-cost solution for companies who want to create an image for oneself on the Internet.  Jydsk Web & IT Løsninger delivers a fresh developed user-friendly standard-system to the schools and companies, to a manageable price. The normal price for a “handmade” intranet and internet system is between € 50.000 – € 100.000. But this is not a system you buy, this system is rentable and the monthly licenses start at € 40. 
With SchoolSystem, updating and maintaining your web-site is piece of cake, thanks to the built in WYSIWYG ( What You See Is What You Get) editor you’ll create web-pages just like working in Microsoft Word, you can change the look and Content of the web-page in just seconds.
SchoolSystem is not a program you need to install onto your computer, it is a web-application, the only thing required for you to maintain your web-site is an Internet connection and a computer with Microsoft Internet Explorer.

You no longer have to hire highly skilled people to take care of your web-site, you can do it by yourself. Not only do you save time, you also save money.

SchoolSystem is to be found in 2 versions, a Basic or a Pro – both able to be expanded after your needs. Both versions contain all the possibilities you need to maintain and update your web-site.
Furthermore SchoolSystem is now also in a version targeted to companies.

Do you want to know more about SchoolSystem and all its possibilities then send an e-mail or contact Jydsk Web & IT Løsninger on the phone-number in the left top corner, and let us have a informal talk.
Avatar billede mini-me Nybegynder
15. juli 2003 - 11:37 #1
Det var ikke mange ;-)
Avatar billede repox Seniormester
15. juli 2003 - 12:02 #2
sales consultant basically => sales consultant, basically /sales consultant; basically

can have a up to date => can have an up-to-date

the work with publishing => The work with publishing

responsibility in a Company. In this way the Company => company med lille c

In this way the Company do not have to have expenses to an extern web-bureau => In this way the company does not have hire an extern web-bureau (lyder lidt bedre)

scratch, to the individual Company => scratch, for the individual company (?)

could call, building blocks, which => could call 'building blocks', which

just get linked on => can be build into the CMS (lyder bedre, synes jeg)

monthly licenses start at € 40 )> monthly licenses cost start at € 40 (?)

Og en lille note ville være at eventuelt dele dele den øverste tekst op i lidt flere sektioner, for det ser anstrengende ud.
Avatar billede mini-me Nybegynder
15. juli 2003 - 13:27 #3
Jeg vil give 50 point for ovenstående, hvis det er ok med dig... da jeg har fået en udefra til at læse det og hun har fanget lidt mere :-)
Avatar billede roenving Novice
15. juli 2003 - 13:36 #4
for people without proper knowledge ==> for people without knowledge (f.eks.)

En sætning, som knudrer og skal opdeles -- meningerne snor sig ind imellem hinanden:
With a CMS is possible for the secretary, the manager, sales consultant basically everyone who has access to the company’s web-site, and are provided with a password and username, can take care of the daily update and in this way the company can have a up to date dynamic web-site.

extern web-bureau ==> external web-bureau

With a CMS you get what you call a dynamic webpage <== uden komma

built-in WYSIWYG

Not only do you save time, you also save money. ==> You do not only save time, you also save money

Do you want to know more about SchoolSystem and all its possibilities then send an e-mail or contact Jydsk Web & IT Løsninger on the phone-number in the left top corner, and let us have a informal talk.
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If you want to know more about SchoolSystem and all its possibilities please send an e-mail or contact Jydsk Web & IT Løsninger using the phone-number in the top left corner, and let us have a informal talk.
Avatar billede repox Seniormester
15. juli 2003 - 14:55 #5
Lyder fair nok! ;)

Og ja, det ser ganske fornuftigt ud det hun fangede... :)
Avatar billede roenving Novice
15. juli 2003 - 15:08 #6
*g* -- et hurtigt kønsskifte for mig ,-)
-- jeg begyndte bare før mini-me kommenterede 13:27:04 ...
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