Avatar billede htmlkongen Novice
14. januar 2004 - 08:10 Der er 15 kommentarer og
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Rette lidt engelsk?

Nogen der vil rette de mest alm fejl her:

The world oldest strip cartoon exists in the city Bayeux in the Normandy. It is exhibit in a striking museum, where the whole story are told by light show, film and posters before you are slipped through in the hall, where the actual masterpiece is hanging. The long exhibition case is floodlighted with a large number floodlight projectors, otherwise is the room dark. At the entrance you will be supplied with headphones, so you have “text” to the pictures. (English, German, or French after your own choice) The comments are controlled by electronically impulses.

There is 58 pictures in all, stitched on a piece of canvas, which is 70 meters long. That enormous piece of handwork was created in the 11th century. The narrator makes it clear to all (us?), that Wilhelm the conquer was quite within one’s rights to invade England and break the English army in the battle of Hastings in 1066. The fact is that he was cheated by the English King Harald, who had promised to make Vilhelm king in England, but he had crowned his own head instead.

There is a lot going on these pictures: Warships being build and loaded with weapons, horses, soldiers and a lot of good French wine, so the Norman’s are prepared for the trip over the Channel. Der bliver eated and drenched at huge party’s, and there will be fighted so the wounded humans and animals are raised in the air, and the dead are spread on the battlefield. The serie concludes very abrupt: Vilhelms men kill Harald and capture England, messenger set out, and here is the end of the hanging. There is no really closing, where you for example sees Vilhelm (bliver kronet) . You don’t know om det aldrig er blevet gjort helt færdigt, eller om den sidste del er blevet slidt af i årenes løb. The battle at Hastings is a historical landmark, because it is succeed anyone to capture England. Napoleon and Hitler did their best, but the attempt failed. It is moreover incredible, that the Bayeux tapestry still exists, because the allied landing beaches was almost completely destroyed during the battle about the Normandy after the invasion in 1944. Bayeux was meanwhile the first city, which was set free by the allied forces. You avoid for that reason heavy fighting and the usual havocs and the Bayeux tapestry still extent for the posterity.

Den rigtige tekst er her:

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Avatar billede ird Praktikant
14. januar 2004 - 08:45 #1
The world oldest strip cartoon exists in the city Bayeux in the Normandy. It is exhibit in a striking museum, where the whole story are told by light show, film and posters before you are slipped through in the hall, where the actual masterpiece is hanging. The long exhibition case is floodlighted with a large number (of) floodlight projectors, otherwise is the room dark(the room is dark). At the entrance you will be supplied with headphones, so you have(can read the text) “text” to the pictures. (English, German, or French after your own choice) The comments are controlled by electronically impulses.


There is 58 pictures in all, stitched on a piece of canvas, which is 70 meters long. That enormous piece of handwork was created in the 11th century. The narrator makes it clear to all (us?) (of us(, that Wilhelm the conquer was quite within one’s rights to invade England and break the English army in the battle of Hastings in 1066. The fact is that he was cheated by the English King Harald, who had promised to make Vilhelm king in England, but he had crowned his own head instead.


There is a lot going on(a lot is happening on) these pictures: Warships being build and loaded with weapons, horses, soldiers and a lot of good French wine, so the Norman’s are prepared for the trip over(across) the Channel. Der bliver eated and drenched at huge party’s,(people will eat a huge party's) and there will be fighted(fought) so the wounded humans and animals are raised in the air, and the dead are spread on the battlefield. The serie concludes very abrupt: Vilhelms men kill(killed) Harald and capture(captured) England, messenger(where) set(send) out, and here is the end of the hanging. There is no really closing, where you for example sees(see) Vilhelm (bliver kronet) . You don’t know om det aldrig er blevet gjort helt færdigt, eller om den sidste del er blevet slidt af i årenes løb. The battle at Hastings is a historical landmark, because it is succeed anyone to capture England. Napoleon and Hitler did their best, but the attempt failed. It is moreover incredible, that the Bayeux tapestry still exists, because the allied landing beaches was almost completely destroyed during the battle about the Normandy after the invasion in 1944. Bayeux was meanwhile the first city, which was set free by the allied forces. You avoid for that reason heavy fighting and the usual havocs and the Bayeux tapestry still extent for the posterity.

Har lavet lidt men den er jo slet slet ikke færdig. Der er Dansk midt i det hele????
Avatar billede ird Praktikant
14. januar 2004 - 08:47 #2
"You don’t know om det aldrig er blevet gjort helt færdigt, eller om den sidste del er blevet slidt af i årenes løb" o.s.v.
Avatar billede therevelation Nybegynder
14. januar 2004 - 08:58 #3
1. afsnit.
1.linie - cartoon strip, an exhibit
2.linie - a light show
3.linie - into the hall
4.linie - the room is dark

2. afsnit.
1. linie - there are
2. linie - enten us all eller all of us
5. linie - wilhelm *s*

3. afsnit.
1. linie - enten er erstat "going" med happening ellers skal du have et "on" mere. (going on, on these....), Warships are
2.linie - Der bliver *s*  desværre virker linket ikke men hvis du skriver den fulde sætning på dansk oversætter jeg den lige :)
3. linie - will be fought end then the wounded....
4. linie wilhelms
6. linie - wilhelm gets crowned, .You don't know if that is the actually end, or if the last part has been woren during the years.
8. linie - has succeede
sidste linie "Bayeux tapestry still ectend for the posterity" ....giver ikke rigtig mening...kan du give mig den sætning på dansk *s*

MvH Michal
Avatar billede therevelation Nybegynder
14. januar 2004 - 08:59 #4
8. linie - has succeeded *s*
Avatar billede therevelation Nybegynder
14. januar 2004 - 08:59 #5
umff ird er altid hutigst ..grrrr *s*
Avatar billede ird Praktikant
14. januar 2004 - 09:10 #6
:))

gjorde det ikke færdigt da jeg ikke orker sidde og oversætte det han har skrevet på Dansk :)
Har vist glemt at give dig karma therevelation for dit altid gode humær :)
Avatar billede htmlkongen Novice
14. januar 2004 - 09:36 #7
Meget godt sat op therevelation :) Men hvad mener du med will be fought end then the wounded ? Er det rigtigt?
Avatar billede ird Praktikant
14. januar 2004 - 09:37 #8
Ja han har ret, men hvorfor er hele teksten ikke oversat til eng?
Avatar billede htmlkongen Novice
14. januar 2004 - 09:45 #9
Fordi jeg ikke kunne oversætte lige de enkelte sætninger :)
Avatar billede htmlkongen Novice
14. januar 2004 - 09:59 #10
Kan I? :D
Avatar billede htmlkongen Novice
14. januar 2004 - 14:11 #11
Smid et svar hvis der skal uddeles point
Avatar billede therevelation Nybegynder
14. januar 2004 - 18:35 #12
giv dem til ird...han er så fattig *ss*
Avatar billede ird Praktikant
14. januar 2004 - 18:43 #13
ellers tak..hellere karma *GG*
Avatar billede therevelation Nybegynder
14. januar 2004 - 18:54 #14
*ss*
Avatar billede htmlkongen Novice
15. januar 2004 - 09:35 #15
Nej jeg gider ikke det Karma, synes det er en skod idé, men smid et svar hvis i vil ha point
Avatar billede therevelation Nybegynder
15. januar 2004 - 09:43 #16
så snupper jeg de 15 point *sss* har jo lidt mindre end ird *blink*
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