31. januar 2004 - 18:28Der er
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jeg skal ha det her skrevet på eng.
hej jeg vil høger igen om der sku være en der vil hjælpe mig med at oversætte det her brev til eng. _________________________________________________________________
Hej
det er dejligt at høger det går dig godt :) jeg har også savnet at skrive med dig, men også at høger din stemme så jeg tror jeg vil ringe til dig på mandag. lige nu sider jeg og høger "vores sang" det er som om du er her også.... ja vis jeg lukker mine øjne. jeg har lige kikket på de billeder jakob sendet til os de er også gode :)
en anden ting er kan du huske hinde der abejdet på den isbar vi var på ? ja hinde du gave drikke penge og syndes var så sød ? min ven er kærste med hinde nu og hun er kanon sød ja og hun kan også godt huske dig :) sku hilse dig
det ville vær så dejligt vis du ku komme og besøge mig her i Danmark ja du kan også læse eng. her og der er også dannse skoler.... tink lige over det søde
jeg ved ikke om jeg sage jeg også hade et job på et diskotek i KBH. jeg er barmand det heder disko IN det er bare et job jeg har få sjove ja du ved jo at jeg elsker at abejde i en bar. i aften skal jeg på abejde der så jeg er ved at gør mig klar :)
vis nu jeg ville komme og besøge dig om et par måneder kan jeg så vær hos dig og din famile ? ja det er jo kun en uge for jeg har jo et job her og jeg kan nok ikke få fri mere end en uge, men er det noget der er muligt ? ja men jeg bare så gerne se dig igen og snakke lidt med dig´ jeg savner dig meget
jeg håber meget du har det godt og at du klar skolen mern jeg må løbe nu jeg skal snart afsted til jobbet
I'm glad to hear you're doing well :) I've been looking forward to writing with you again, but not as much as i miss hearing your voice. As a atter of fact, i think i'm gonna call you monday. Right now i'm listening to our song, it's almost as if you were here... at least if i close my eyes. I've just been looking at the photos Jacob sent us, i think they are very good :)
Another thing, do uou remember the girl that worked at the icecream place we went to? The one you gave a tip and you thought was nice?
She has become the girlfriend of one of my friends, and she's a really nice girl. She remembers you to, i promised to say hello for her :)
It would be so nice if you culd come for at visit here in Denmark. You could study english here, and also attend dancing class. Think about it!
I can't remember if i already told you that i also work at a disco in Copenhagen? I'm a bartender there. The place is called Disko IN. It's just a job i have for the fun of it, as you know, i like to work in bars. Actually i'm working there tonight, so i'm about to get ready right now :)
If i were to visit you in a few months, do you think it would be possible to stay at you and your familys place? It's only for a week, cause i have to get back to work. I don't think i could be away from my job for more than a week. But do you think it will be possible to stay with you?
I would really like to see you again, and talk to you, i miss you a lot!
I hope you are well, and school is going allright.
I'm glad to hear you're doing well :) I've been looking forward to writing with you again, but not as much as i miss hearing your voice. As a matter of fact, i think i'm gonna call you monday. Right now i'm listening to our song, it's almost as if you were here... at least if i close my eyes. I've just been looking at the photos Jacob sent us, i think they're very good :)
Another thing, do you remember the girl that worked at the icecream place we went to? The one you gave a tip and you thought was nice?
She has become the girlfriend of one of my friends, and she's a really nice girl. She remembers you to, i promised to say hello for her :)
It would be so nice if you culd come for at visit here in Denmark. You could study english here, and also attend dancing class. Think about it!
I can't remember if i already told you that i also work at a disco in Copenhagen? I'm a bartender there. The place is called Disko IN. It's just a job i have for the fun of it, as you know, i like to work in bars. Actually i'm working there tonight, so i'm about to get ready right now :)
If i were to visit you in a few months, do you think it would be possible to stay at you and your familys place? It's only for a week, cause i have to get back to work. I don't think i could be away from my job for more than a week. But do you think it will be possible to stay with you?
I would really like to see you again, and talk to you, i miss you a lot!
I hope you are well, and school is going allright.
okay nu er det så bare problemet kommer :( soulmand skrev føst til mig men du kom med det først :) men soulmand har gjort det for mig før og nu ved jeg ikke vad jeg skal gør vis nu jeg gir jeg begge to 75 point er det så ikke ok ?
It's good to hear you are doing well :) I have also missed to write with you, and to hear your (lovely) voice. I think I will be calling you on monday. Right now I'm listening to "our tune" - it's like you are here too .... yah, if I close my eyes. I have just seen the pictures Jakob sent to us, they are also fine :)
Another thing - can you remember the girl who worked at the icecreambar where we were? Yes, the one you gave tips and found to be so sweet? She is sweetheart to my friend now, and she really is topnice - yes and she remembers you too :) she told me to say hi.
It would be so lovely if you could come and visit me here i Denmark. And you can also read English here, and there are dancing schools also ... think about it dear.
I don't know if I told you I also had a job on a discoteque here in Copenhagen. I'm a Bartender at a place called Disko IN, it's just for fun, you know I love working in a bar. To night I'm going to work there, so i'm just about getting ready now :)
If I should come and visit you in a couple of months, could I then stay at you and your family ? It's only for a week, cause I have a job here and I may not be able to leave for more than one week, but will it be possible ? I am just so eager to see you again and talk with you, I miss you alot.
ja nu når jeg ser dem begge to sammen må jeg sige at jeg nok sige vem der har gjort det best og så syndes jeg det bliver soulmand der får de point pgr. af det og så også at han skrev at han var gået i gang med det som den føste håber du forstår popsy men vis du syndes jeg laver en fejel så må du sige til...
du kan dele eller du kan frit vælge hvad for en oversættelse du vil bruge, du har det endelige valg - og et hurtigt blik viser også en lille forskel i stil - your choice
okay men det er nok lidt sent ;) men jeg syndes bare det var den beste men nu må vi se vad min pige syndes ;) jaaa jeg kan jo sende dem begge he he eller nejjjjj det er vist ikke en god ide
soulmand >>> og et hurtigt blik viser også en lille forskel i stil - your choice <<< Fuldstændig korrekt....popsys version er langt bedre end din. Jeg stødte på op til flere fejl i dein, men hæftede min ikke ved nogen i popsys.
Desuden er popsys sprog meget bedre end dit...
Det var ikke for at nedgøre dig, men synes jeg ville sige det, da DU siger til semot, at det er din der en den bedste.
ja men der er ikke så meget i det ... det er sendt og jeg syndes det beste var det fra soulmand og så er der ikke så meget mere i det. men du får da tak for din mening :)
semot >> tjooo, det er måske rigtig nok, mener nu ikke at der er den store forskel på de to eksempler.
Følgende svar (sætninger) fra soulmand er ihvertfald IKKE korrekt engelsk:
"She is sweetheart to my friend now"
"and she really is topnice "
"And you can also read English here" <<< Du mener jo IKKE at hun skal læse (som i en bog) i Danmark, men det du mener er jo, at hun kan "læse" (studere) engelsk i Danmark.
"could I then stay at you and your family " << Sådan kan man ikke sige
"To night" <<< Det staves Tonight
Jeg kunne sikkert finde flere ting, hvis jeg gennemgik grammatikken fuldstændig!!!
Anyway.....som sagt, må du selvfølgelig selv om det. Jeg gav dig bare et GODT råd :O)
<<okay skal gerne vise hvorfor jeg syndes best om soulmand
exp. jeg har også savnet at skrive med dig popsy: I've been looking forward to writing with you again soulmand: have also missed to write with you
hun skrev til mig at hun hade savnet at skrive med mig og så er der en forskæld på de to svar ik´>>
<<have also missed to write with you>> <-- Ikke korrekt engelsk, i bedste fald kan den gå som: have also missed writing with you.
Den helt korrekte engelske skrivning ville være min, med den lille tilføjelse som du selv gør opmærksom på: I've (I have) ALSO been looking forward to writing with you again.
he he he stop det er bare et brev til en pige der bor i rusland og jeg har mødt hinde i spanien da jeg abejde der nede og hun forstår ikke så godt eng aligevel så hun er nok lige glad og forstår nok det :)
jeg har bare valt det brev og jeg ved ikke vem der har rat...... jeg kan ikke selv skrive på eng. det er jo der for jeg har lagt det her ind ik´ men det er sendt håber i alle 3 forstår ;)
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