engelsk - gennemsyn
Hey eksperterJeg ved den ik passer helt ind i konceptet af eksperten, men hva f**** der er så mange andre der spørger om alverdens ting her i forummet :)
Jeg håber nogen vil tage et kig på denne engelsk tekst og evt rette den til, med gramatiske fejl, evt hvis der er nogle stavefejl også.
På forhånd mange tak
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An incredibly popular TV series
The TV series “Beverly Hills” is most likely one of the most popular around kids and youngsters.
The persons most often act like remote controlled Barbie dolls. Steve gets amazingly aggressive and almost runs to the nearest pub, if Kelly rejects him after he has dressed up for party.
When Brenda of some reason behaves sullen and rudely for a whole day, it is often most likely because she feels that Dylan is a complete idiot.
They all react childish and foolish. But in spite of the plot as usually is predictable, are more and more young girls watching the TV series
For these young girls the TV-dolls are functioning as beautifully and admirably idols, as they for any price wishes to imitate.
They do everything in their power to imitate Brenda or Kelly. But after they spend hours in front of their mirrors putting make-up on they get disappointed. They don’t look like the idols at all.
Mary from Liverpool, full of freckles will never become Kelly from Beverly Hills, no matter how hard she is trying.
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