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01. november 2005 - 22:14 Der er 6 kommentarer og
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Rettelse af engelsk manus

Hej. Mig og min bror har lavet et manus på engelsk som skal rettes (både stave, sprog og kommafejl!):

Nic: Hello everyone! I'm Nic
My brother, Ben, and I decided to make a documentary about lobsters. We spend a whole weekend making it.
Ben: Yeah, it was very good... until we found out...

Nic: "and that was our documentary about lobsters..."

Ben: ...that's right... we didn't take off the camera lid.
Nic: We could have made more money that you could ever imagine.
Ben: So then, we decided to make another movie.
Nic: ...About stones.

Ben: "The stone is a very cool object. Many colors and shapes."

Nic: And that was just as lame as the other.
Ben: We ran out of ideas until Nic came up with this:

*Smashing camera*
Avatar billede bufferzone Praktikant
01. november 2005 - 22:27 #1
Jeg har rettet/tilføjet ganske lidt

Nic: Hello everyone! I'm Nic
My brother, Ben and I have decided to make a documentary about lobsters. We spend a whole weekend making it.
Ben: Yeah, it was very good... until we found out...

Nic: "and that was our documentary about lobsters..."

Ben: ...that's right... we didn't take off the camera lid.
Nic: We could have made more money that you could ever imagine.
Ben: So then, we decided to make another movie.
Nic: ...About stones.

Ben: "The stone is a very cool object. Many colours and shapes."

Nic: And that was just as lame a subject as the other one.
Ben: We ran out of ideas until Nic came up with this:

*Smashing camera*
Avatar billede bufferzone Praktikant
01. november 2005 - 22:27 #2
Undskyld, glemte et komma

My brother, Ben and I, have
Avatar billede flashnet Nybegynder
01. november 2005 - 22:46 #3
er der ikke flere fejl udover dem?
Avatar billede flashnet Nybegynder
01. november 2005 - 22:47 #4
btw... det er ikke "min bror og ben og jeg" men "min bror som hedder ben og jeg" =3
Avatar billede bufferzone Praktikant
01. november 2005 - 22:52 #5
Ok så ville jeg mene det skal være

My brother Ben and I have decided... (Ben and I er grundled)

Jeg kan ikke se flere fejl. nogle få tink kan skri
ves anderledes, f.eks.

We spend a whole weekend making it kan skrives som We spend a whole weekend shooting it eller recording it
Avatar billede flashnet Nybegynder
01. november 2005 - 22:58 #6
tanks!
Avatar billede bufferzone Praktikant
01. november 2005 - 22:59 #7
velbekommen og du vender bare tilbage med mere hvis du får behov
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