14. november 2005 - 21:25Der er
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hJæLp mig med rettelse af engelsk stil!
Jeg har fået engelsk stil for som er nedenuder. Vil nogen kloge hoved ikke se om de kan finde nogle stave, sprog og kommafejl så siger jeg TAK!
Around the world
Traveling to other countries has become more normal, than it was before, like 20 years ago. Me and my family has been on a lot of trips, that I am going to tell about.
I travel at least one time every year. Even the year I was born, I traveled to see some other places than Denmark. I visit family, relax or other things that we finds interesting in my family. I don't even know how many trips I have done, but I think it’s around 30 times. Still, I haven't explored the entire world yet. But who knows? Maybe some day I have. Sometimes the trips are funny, but I also remember one, that wasn't good at all. Some of the places I enjoyed was places like Egypt, where we saw the Pyramids and some old temple. It was exciting, though it was too hot. We tried 51 degrees Celsius in Luxor, which is a famous place in Egypt.
I also enjoyed Bulgaria. It was also hot, but in a comfortable way. We went fishing on the ocean, where me and my brother caught nine fish together. None of the other persons on the fisherboat caught anything. We had the fishes for dinner.
A memory I still have, is about America. I was only four years old, when me and my family went to different places in the United States. Places like Los Angeles and Hollywood. I still remember something from that trip. Things like Universal Studios, where you drive in a bus, but there is disasters everywhere around you. I also remember two magicians with white tigers, but I heard that one of the tigers attacked a magician some month back.
China is also a good place to be. I have been there three times now. My grandparents are from china, and we have family and friends there. Last time I was in China, was in my summer vacation. I studied Chinese a month on a Chinese language and culture school. Everyday we should study. Even in the weekends, though Sunday was ‘the trip day’, where we e.g. saw the Great Wall.
But sometimes the trip isn't as good as you hoped.
My mom told me, we was going to France in our christmas holiday to visit family (I have been in France about 7 times). I didn't liked it, because usually we celebrate christmas in Denmark. But then we celebrated christmas in France, and of course we had presents. But then, some days after, my dad was mad on me and my brother. He was so angry, that he broke some of our presents. But sometimes France can be good. Especially when we go to Disneyland.
Of course there is places I want to visit. These places are Japan, Hawaii and Australia. Japan, because my two cousins is born there, and I have heard, that there are cool gadgets, such as new gaming consoles, and they have the craziest sport competions in television. And hawaii, because I have heard so many good things about it, and it is everyone’s dream to sit on the beach when it is very hot. And Australia, because they have so many interesting animals, e.g. kangaroos, sharks and crocodiles, and good places to go.
Den moderne arbejdsplads er i stigende grad afhængig af mødelokaler til at fremme samarbejde, men dette skift medfører også stigende sikkerhedsudfordringer.
Vil du ikke være sød at spørge din lærer istedet?! Er det ikke bedre at selv kunne engang du skal til eksamen, fremfor at få andre til det og få dårlige karaktere?!
Hvis jeg var dig ville jeg spørge din lære om hjælp, evt. få dine forældre til at hjælpe dig '-)
Travelling to other countries has become more normal, than it was before, like 20 years ago. I have been with my family on a lot of trips, and I will now tell you about some of them.
I travel at least once every year. Even the year I was born, I travelled to see some other places than Denmark. I visit family, relax or other things that we finds interesting in my family. I don't even know how many trips I have done, but I think it’s around 30. Still, I haven't explored the entire world yet. But who knows? Maybe some day I will have. Sometimes the trips are fun, but I also to look back on one that was not good at all. I really enjoyed visiting places like Egypt, where we saw the Pyramids and some old temple. It was exciting, though it was too hot. We tried 51 degrees Celsius in Luxor, which is a famous place in Egypt.
I also enjoyed Bulgaria. It was also hot, but in a comfortable way. We went fishing on the ocean, where my brother and I caught nine fish together. None of the other persons on the fishing boat caught anything. We had the fishes for dinner.
A memory I still have, is about America. I was only four years old, when my family and I went to different places in the United States. Places like Los Angeles and Hollywood. I still remember something from that trip. Things like Universal Studios, where you drive in a bus, but there are disasters everywhere around you. I also remember two magicians with white tigers, but I heard that one of the tigers attacked a magician some month back.
China is also a good place to be. I have been there three times now. My grandparents are from china, and we have family and friends there. Last time I was in China, was in my summer vacation. I studied Chinese a month on a Chinese language and culture school. Everyday we should study. Even in the weekends, though Sunday was ‘the trip day’, where we e.g. saw the Great Wall.
But sometimes the trip isn't as good as you hoped it would be.
My mom told me, we were going to France in our Christmas holiday to visit family (I have been in France about 7 times). I didn't like it, because usually we celebrate Christmas in Denmark. But then we celebrated Christmas in France, and of course we had presents. But then, some days after, my dad was mad on me and my brother. He was so angry, that he broke some of our presents. But sometimes France can be good. (Especially Disneyland)
Of course there are places I want to visit. These places are Japan, Hawaii and Australia. Japan, because my two cousins is born there, and I have heard, that there are cool gadgets, such as new gaming consoles, and they have the craziest sport competitions in television. Hawaii because I have, heard so many good things about the country. And it is everyone’s dream to sit on the beach when it is very hot and just chill out. Last but not least, Australia. Mainly because they have so many interesting animals e.g. kangaroos, sharks and crocodiles, But also really interesting places to visit, like the outback.
I really hope to visit these places some day!
Der, har rettet lidt af det hele... Ikke perfekt, men helt klart okay :)
Travelling to other countries has become more normal than it was before, like 20 years ago. My family and I has been on a lot of trips, which I am going to tell about.
I travel at least once a year. Even the year where I was born I travelled to see some other places than Denmark. I visit family, relax or other things that we find interesting in my family. I don't even know how many trips I have done, but I think it’s around 30. Still, I haven't explored the entire world yet. But who knows? Maybe some day I will have. Sometimes the trips are funny, but I also remember one, that wasn't that good at all. Some of the places which I enjoyed was places like Egypt, where we saw the Pyramids and some old temple. It was exciting, though it was too hot. We experienced 51 degrees Celsius in Luxor, which is a famous place in Egypt.
I also enjoyed Bulgaria. It was also hot, but in a comfortable way. We went fishing on the ocean, where my brother and I caught nine fish together. None of the other persons on the fishing boat caught anything. We had the fish for dinner.
A memory I still have, is about America. I was only four years old, when my family and I went to different places in the United States. Places like Los Angeles and Hollywood. I still remember something from that trip. Things like Universal Studios, where you drive in a bus, and there are disasters everywhere around you. I also remember two magicians with white tigers, and I heard that one of the tigers attacked a magician some month back.
China is also a good place to be. I have been there three times now. My grandparents are from china, and we have family and friends there. Last time I was in China, was in my summer vacation. I studied Chinese a month on a Chinese language and culture school. We should study every day. Even in the weekends, though Sunday was “the trip day”, where we e.g. saw the Great Wall.
But sometimes the trip wasn't as good as you hoped.
My mom told me, we were going to France in our Christmas holiday to visit family (I have been in France about 7 times). I didn't like it, because usually we celebrate Christmas in Denmark. But then we celebrated Christmas in France, and of course we had presents. But then, some days after, my dad was mad on me and my brother. He was so angry, that he broke some of our presents. But sometimes France can be good. I Especially enjoy when we go to Disneyland.
Of course there are places I want to visit. These places are Japan, Hawaii and Australia. Japan, because my two cousins is born there, and I have heard, that there are cool gadgets, such as new gaming consoles, and they have the craziest sport competitions in television. And Hawaii, because I have heard so many good things about it, it’s everyone’s dream to sit on the beach when it’s very hot. And Australia, because they have so many interesting animals like kangaroos, sharks and crocodiles, and good places to go.
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