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Hi Jane!

Every teenager can relate to having problems with their parents, because they can’t get their approval to stay out longer or get permission to do something else. So you’re not the only one who has these kinds of problems. I don’t know what the problem is between you and your parents, but it’s most likely that you don’t speak so habitually with your parents about your problems. If you and your parents sat down and discussed your problems, they would conceivably give you a little more space and free time, on your own. The reason that they won’t let you stay out longer is that your parents care about you and don’t want you to get hurt. I don’t think it’s a good idea to provoke them further, for example dying your hair or come later home than you were told to. If you do that they just get more nervous, and will give you even more punishment than you got before. It’s not a good idea to refuse to say where you have been and with who. I think you need to tell you mom and dad where you’re going, with who and what kind of party it is. If you do that they won’t stay up all night just waiting for you to come home. You need to make them comfortable when you’re out in the evening. Sometimes you might need to tell them a little lie or story so they get secure and comfortable, but the most important is that they can trust in you. Trust is very important, if your parents don’t trust in you, you can forget everything about spending your night out.

In the beginning I was helpful all the time so my mom and dad gave me permission to go out in the weekends and sometimes they gave me money too. And if my mom said that I wasn’t allowed to go out in weekends and have some fun. Then I just walked home to my dad and slept there, because they are divorced. He always gave me the permission and he almost couldn’t say “no”, if I asked him nicely. Sometimes they both said “no” and then I’ve got a problem. It’s wasn’t hopefully not very often that it was happening.
That was only in the beginning, now am I allowed to do everything, of course I’m not allowed to smoke weed, but I don’t won’t to either.
I think that the reason for that I almost can do everything now with theirs permission is that they really trust in me. The only rules are that I’m not allowed to do anything illegally and anything stupid. Of course I make something really stupid sometimes, but it’s almost never on purpose.


One of the really good things is that I don’t have any time to come home at. And they haven’t forbid me to drink alcohol either.
I’ve never had those kinds of problems with my parents like you; it’s maybe because I’m a boy, I actually thing that parents are protecting their daughter more than their son. Or else I’m just a lucky boy who can do what I want.

My advice to you Jane is that you should try to do what your parents tell you to for a week and maybe a little bit longer and then sees what happens. If you don’t do what they say you’ll just make things worse than they are now.
And of cause try to talk to your parents about those issues that borders you. I hope you can use my answers to something positive and make up with your parents.

Love Jeppe

Hi Jane!

Every teenager can relate to having problems with their parents, because they can’t get their approval to stay out longer or get permission to do something else. So you’re not the only one who has this kind of problem. I don’t know what the problem is between you and your parents, but it’s most likely that you don’t speak so habitually with your parents about your problems. If you and your parents sat down and discussed your problems, they would conceivably give you a little more space and free time, on your own. The reason that they won’t let you stay out longer is that your parents care about you, and don’t want you to get hurt. I don’t think it’s a good idea to provoke them further, for example by dying your hair or come home later than you were told to. If you do that they just get more nervous, and will give you even more punishment than you got before. It’s not a good idea to refuse to say where you have been and with whom. I think you need to tell you mom and dad where you’re going, with whom and what kind of party it is. If you do that they won’t stay up all night just waiting for you to come home. You need to make them comfortable when you’re out in the evening. Sometimes you might need to tell them a little lie or story so they get secure and comfortable, but the most important is that they can trust in you. Trust is very important, if your parents don’t trust in you, you can forget everything about spending your night out.

In the beginning I was helpful all the time so my mom and dad gave me permission to go out in the weekends and sometimes they gave me money too. If my mom said that I wasn’t allowed to go out in weekends and have some fun, then I just walked home to my dad and slept there, because they are divorced. He always gave me the permission and he almost couldn’t say “no”, if I asked him nicely. Sometimes they both said “no” and then I had a problem. Fortunate for me, that situation did not occur very often.
That was only in the beginning, now am I allowed to do everything, of course I’m not allowed to smoke weed, but I don’t want to either.
I think that the reason I almost can do everything now with their permission, is that they really trust in me. The only rules are that I’m not allowed to do anything illegally and anything stupid. Of course I make something really stupid sometimes, but it’s almost never on purpose.


One of the really good things is that I don’t have any curfew. And they haven’t forbidden me to drink alcohol either.
I’ve never had that kind of problems with my parents like you have; maybe it’s because I’m a boy, I actually think that parents are protecting their daughters more than their sons, or else I’m just a lucky boy who can do what I want.

My advice to you Jane is that you should try to do what your parents tell you to for a week and maybe a little bit longer and then wait and see what happens. If you don’t do what they say, you’ll just make things worse than they are now.
And of course try to talk to your parents about those issues that bothers you. I hope you can use my answers to something positive and make up with your parents.

Love Jeppe

flot men mangler der feks..ikke lidt komaér i denne sætning.?

In the beginning I was helpful all the time so my mom and dad gave me permission to go out in the weekends and sometimes they gave me money too. If my mom said that I wasn’t allowed to go out in weekends and have some fun

min version..
In the beginning I was helpful all the time, so my mom and dad gave me permission to go out in the weekends, and sometimes they gave me money too. If my mom said, that I wasn’t allowed to go out in weekends, and have some fun
..så check grammatikken, og komma fejl..O)

bartfreak -> hehe.. komaér :( præcis det samme som min lærer siger ;)

kunne jeg få dig til at kigge den igennem for koma fejl? bare det mest nødvendige steder.

bartfreak, jeg husker min lærer sige noget om, aldrig komma foran that..

ja du er meget glad for at bruge "that"..i mit eks, kunne det faktisk undgås..O)

fandt lige dette..O)

http://download.com.com/3000-2401-915653.html?tag=lst-0-1

er der 2 ord i en sætning man kan sig " I (jeg)" til, skal der komma imellem..O)
Go´ arbejdslyst, jeg er færdig men skolen..*S*

Engelsk komma er meget MEGET besværligt. F.x. må man aldrig have komma ved that. Grundreglen er: "If you are in doubt then leave it out".

ok, tak for det :D

Det jeg har afleveret min stil og der kun kom et bud, giver jeg point til popsy.

mvh Ranger