06. oktober 2003 - 22:27Der er
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Engelsk grammatik hjælp
Hej... Jeg har en mindre engelsk tekst jeg har skrevet, som jeg gerne vil have lidt hjælp til at finde grammatik fejl etc. i. Nogle, der vil hjælpe med det? ( muligvis mange fejl i :() teksten:
Dear Chief Seattle
I understand your feelings for your areas. But I cant take your spirit ideas seriously. Water cant be like blood, I understand that your generation has lived there in hole your lifes. But there are many other places where you can live like you do now or better. Well, okay, if you wish that we told our childrens about your time, we’ll do it. I’ll learn my children, that each ghostly reflection in the clear water of the lakes tells of events and memories in the life of your people, and we will remember that the air is precious to you. But, I cant promise, that we not will make a city,and I understand you does not like those ideas? I understand, what you think about me, but i’m not a terrorist and will not destroy your areas. But I’ll use it, maybe better than you did. I know that it will pain you with cities, but think how useful it can be? And how many normal peoples there can get homes. Ofcorse you are still welcome, everybody is welcome, so where is the problem? Companies can be etablished, it can be very, very useful for many peoples.
Think about it, you and your generation will always be a part of the history, no matter what. I promise that we will keep the nature clean as god as we can.
I understand your feelings for your areas(??). But I cant take your ideas concerning spirit seriously. Water can't be like blood. I understand that your generation has lived there their entire lifes. But there are many other places where you can live like you do now or even better. Well, okay, if you wish that we tell our childrens about your time, we’ll do it. I’ll teach my children, that each ghostly reflection in the clear water (of the lakes) tells of events and memories in the life of your people, and we will remember that the air is precious to you. But, I cant promise, that we will not make(? - måske found) a city, and I understand that you do not like theese ideas? I understand, what you think about me, but i’m not a terrorist and will not destroy your areas. But I’ll use it, maybe better than you did. I know that it will "pain you with cities"(ikke så godt), but think how useful they can be? And how many normal people who will be able to get a home. Of corse you are still welcome, everybody is welcome, so where is the problem? Companies can be established, it can be very, very useful for many people.
Think about it, you and your generation will always be a part of the history, no matter what. I promise that we will keep the nature clean.
I understand the feelings you have for your areas. But I can't take your spirit ideas seriously. Water can't be like blood, I understand that your generation has lived there in generations, but there's alot of other places, where you can live like you do now, or even better. Well okay, if you wish that we will tell our children about your time, we'll do it. I'll learn my children, that each ghostly reflection in the clear water of the lakes, tells of events and memories in the life of your people, and we will remember that the air is precious to you. But, I cant promise that we wont build a city, and I understand you don't like that idea? I know what you think about me, but i'm not a terrorist, and I will not destroy your areas. Instead I'll use it, maybe better than you did. I know that it will hurt your feelings, if I build cities, but think how useful it can be? And how many ?normal? people that can have their home there. Of course you are still welcome, everybody is welcome, so where is the problem? Companies can be etablished, it can be very very useful for many people.
Think about it, you and your generation will always be a part of the history, no matter what. I promise that we will keep the nature clean as good as we can.
"learn" betyder det "at lære" (dvs. nogen lærer noget) "teach" betyder det "at lære fra sig" (dvs. at lære nogen noget) - Du skal altså bruge "teach" her...
Who... mange mange tak :D Jeg tror helt sikkert, at hvis jeg lige tager hele den tekst popsy postede og, jeg bruger det de andre har skrevet bliver det pefekt!! Mange tak!
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