08. oktober 2003 - 19:32Der er
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Hjælp mig med min stil!
Hej.. Jeg er en dreng på 13 der gerne vil have hjælp til min engelsk stil. Hvis der er nogen der vil rette den for mig ville det være dejligt! Grunden til at jeg spørger her er fordi at jeg er alene hjemme og skal aflevere den i morgen!
My Perfect Day
My perfect day start in my house where I eat breakfast with my wife after that we go out to my car and drive to Copenhagen airport where we take a plane to Detroit. The plane we going to Detroit with are a Boeing 747 one of the biggest machines in the world. In Detroit we go out to my limousine. In the limo the driver said to me we could go to the big fan shop before we go to the game. After 2 hours in the shop we go to the ishockey stadium where we are going to se the last of 7 games against Colorado and Detroit Red Wings. The clubs are playing for winning the best ishockey league in the world also called Stanley Cup. Each team has won 3 games. This is the last and final game in this season. After the game we are going to a pub before we are going to the airport and take a plane to Las Vegas. In Las Vegas we are going in to the biggest casino in the town. Inside the casino we will spend some money so we like to gamble. We will try some of the different slots in the casino. We would also like to play blackjack, roulette, and 3 different kinds of poker, video poker, and craps. After the casino visit we go to the airport in a limousine. In the airport are some of my friends from Denmark waiting. We are going to Hawaii where we hold a very big pool party. We have invited 50 friends from Denmark. When we come to Hawaii, we are going to the biggest house outside town. In this house we have 8 toilets, 46 bedrooms, 3 big swimming pools, 2 kitchens, 4 big TV rooms, a playing hall with all kind of playing machines. After the party my wife and me are going back to Copenhagen with all my friends. I Copenhagen we are going to our house outside the town. The first night in our bed we talked about our trip to America. We said to each other “That is the coolest day in my life”. But the most exciting thing on the trip was the visit in Las Vegas biggest casino. In the casino we won 100 dollars on the video poker machines, which was nice. And me and my wife Carina will never forget this trip.
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My perfect day starts in my house, where I eat breakfast with my wife. After that we go out to my car and drive to Copenhagen airport where we take a plane to Detroit. The plane we are going to Detroit with, are a Boeing 747. One of the largest airplanes in the world. In Detroit we go out to my limousine. In the limousine, the driver said we could go to the big fan shop before we go to the game. After 2 hours in the shop we go to the ishockey stadium where we are going to se the last of 7 games against Colorado and Detroit Red Wings. The clubs are playing for winning the best ishockey league in the world also called Stanley Cup. Each team has won 3 games. This is the last and final game in this season. After the game we are going to a pub before we are going to the airport and take a plane to Las Vegas. In Las Vegas we are going in to the biggest casino in the town. Inside the casino we will spend some money because we like to gamble. We will try some of the different slotmachines in the casino. We would also like to play blackjack, roulette, and 3 different kinds of poker, video poker, and craps. After the casino visit we go to the airport in a limousine. In the airport, some of my friends from Denmark is waiting. We are going to Hawaii where we have arranged a very big pool party. We have invited 50 friends from Denmark. When we come to Hawaii, we are going to the biggest house outside town. In this house we have 8 toilets, 46 bedrooms, 3 big swimming pools, 2 kitchens, 4 big TV rooms, a playing hall with all kind of playing machines. After the party my wife and I are going back to Copenhagen with all my friends. I Copenhagen we are going to our house outside the town. The first night in our bed we talked about our trip to America. We said to each other “That is the coolest day in my life”. But the most exciting thing on the trip was the visit in Las Vegas biggest casino. In the casino we won 100 dollars on the video poker machines, which was nice. And me and my wife Carina will never forget this trip.
Der er flere ting, der kan blive bedre, fx "some of my friends from Denmark is waiting." --- skulle vi ikke lade spørgeren selv opdage hvad der er galt :)
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