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My USA tour started in Lindholm just 50 m. from my school. The clock was 03:30 when we met at the parking area with Løvvang Skolen. We shut drive in bus to Billund. In Billund took we a plane to Amsterdam. In Amsterdam we have to wait some hours because the weather was bad. After 4 hours in the airport could we go into the plane.

7 hours later could we go out from the plane in Chicago. Outside the airport was a big bus waiting for us. After an hour in bus came we to Racine. The bus holds on in a big parking area, where the families were waiting for us. Me and my friend Rasmus find our family. In the family we have four persons mom and dad called Valerie and Jeff, the to children was named Sean and Brook. We have a lot of fun with the family.

Day numbers 2 were we going to Great America. A fun park with at lot of rollercoaster’s.  I try some of them. But not the rollercoaster on the picture because it was too wild. After 8 hours in the park it was time to go home. We found our family an drive home. Next day was we going to the soccer club where we shut play our first match “over there”. Is was a good game and we won 4-0. After the game all of us was so tiered because we play the at lunch time and there was 40ºC.  After 2 days it was time to go too the next place where we shut live.

It was the 4th of July and Americas national day. After 2 hours in bus we came to Rockford, where we shut live with a black family called The Butler Family. Mom and dad called Debra and Martin, and the 3 kids Tyler, Blaise and Alex. The family have a very big house and three cars. In Rockford shut we play our first tournament. The tournament was called Watermelon Soccer Tournament because they have a big sponsor who gives watermelon too all players, leaders and families. It was a nice tournament and we finish number 4 of 12 teams. Our team play against some teams who have players who 1 or 2 years older than the oldest on our team. So it was not easy to win this tournament. After the tournament we have some days with the family. One of them brought we in a big water park (2-3 times bigger than Fårup Sommerland). After the last two days, were we going back to Chicago where we shut fly to New York via Detroit.

When we came to New York we have 3 hours for our self downtown NY. After the 3 hours we drive to New Jersey where we have some hotel rooms. Next morning we stood early op because we were going too se the Statue Of Liberty. It was nice to se the statue it so big. We tried to came op in the statue but it was close, because the who happened 11th September 2001. After the visit on Liberty Island we took the “Liberty Island & Ellis Island ferry” to Ellis Island. After this “ferry tour” we have 5 hours downtown NY. First place we saw was Ground Zero. And it was one of the things I will remember in the rest of my live. This things there happened at this place for just 8 months ago. After this we met again and we go to the last place we shut live.

The last place was Clifton Park 2 hours in bus. In Clifton Park we also shut play a tournament. It happens well and finishes number 3. The last day in Clifton Park we were going to another Fun Park called “The Great Escape”. It was so fun. Next day we shut early op, we have 2 hours in bus to New York.

We came to New York and wait 2 hours. Then we came into our plane. 7 hours later we landed in Amsterdam. Then we have 2 hours to shopping in the airport. After 2 hours we go to our gate and into our plane to Billund. We came to Billund 14:00 (Danish time) Then we have 1½ hour in bus home. It was my best summer vacation ever and I hope I soon can came to USA again.

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Kan jeg jo ikk når jeg ska aflevere den i morgen kl 8:15

My USA tour started in Lindholm just 50 m. from my school. The clock was 3:30am when we met at the parking area at Løvvang Skolen. We were taken by bus to Billund. In Billund we took a plane to Amster-dam. In Amsterdam we had to wait a few hours due to bad weather. After 4 hours in the airport we could board the plane.

7 hours later we could leave the plane in Chicago. Outside the airport a big bus was waiting for us. After an hour by bus we arrived in Racine. The bus parked in a big parking area, where the families were wait-ing for us. Me and my friend Rasmus found our family. In the family we had four persons: mom and dad called Valerie and Jeff, the two children was named Sean and Brook. We had a lot of fun with the family.

On day 2 were we going to Great America. A fun park with at lot of rollercoasters. I tried some of them, but not the rollercoaster on the picture because it was too wild. After 8 hours in the park it was time to go home. We found our family and drove home. Next day we were going to the soccer club where we should play our first match “over there”. It was a good game and we won 4-0. After the game all of us were so tired because we played at lunch time and it was 40ºC.  After 2 days it was time to go to the next place where we should live.

It was the 4th of July and the American national day. After 2 hours by bus we arrived in Rockford, where we should live with a black family called The Butler Family. Mom and dad called Debra and Martin, and the 3 kids Tyler, Blaise and Alex. The family have a very big house and three cars. In Rockford we should play our first tournament. The tournament was called Watermelon Soccer Tournament because they have a big sponsor that gives watermelon too all players, leaders and families. It was a nice tournament and we finished number 4 of 12 teams. Our team played against some teams who have players who are 1 or 2 years older than the oldest on our team. So it was not easy to win this tournament. After the tourna-ment we had some days with the family. On one of them we visited a big water park (2-3 times bigger than Fårup Sommerland). After the last two days, were we going back to Chicago where we should fly to New York via Detroit.

When we came to New York we had 3 hours for ourselves in downtown NY. After the 3 hours we drove to New Jersey where we had some hotel rooms. Next morning we got up early because we were going to see the Statue Of Liberty. It was nice to see the statue – it’s so big. We tried to go up the statue but it was closed, because of what happened 11th September 2001. After the visit on Liberty Island we took the “Liberty Island & Ellis Island ferry” to Ellis Island. After this “ferry tour” we had 5 hours downtown NY. First place we saw was Ground Zero. And it was one of the things I will remember the rest of my live. The things that happened at this place just 8 months ago. After this we met again and we went to the last place we shut live.

The last place was Clifton Park - 2 hours by bus. In Clifton Park we should also play a tournament. It went well and we finished third. The last day in Clifton Park we were going to another Fun Park called “The Great Escape”. It was so fun. Next day we got up early, we had a 2 hour drive by bus to New York.

We arrived in New York and waited 2 hours. We then got on our plane. 7 hours later we landed in Am-sterdam. Then we had 2 hours to shop in the airport. After 2 hours we went to our gate and into our plane to Billund. We arrived in Billund 14:00 (Danish time). Then we had 1½ hours by bus home. It was the best summer vacation ever and I hope I visit USA soon again.

PS. Lav dine lektier selv næste gang.