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Part I:
1: The American summer camp is a great possibility for young people to learn new people and a new culture. The Europeans learn to speak great English and they have some possibilities to be better in a sport, because they on these camps have about 18 different sorts of sports, art and much more.

2: The benefits for example a great soccer player, could be ever more better because he can train every day, he can live like a professional, eat the right food. The live in a soccer camp is so great for a good soccer player, he is together with so many other soccer players who wish the same, to be a professional. And there are so many different things the youngsters can make on these camps. Campers aren't the only ones who get to have lots of fun. Camp staff have full use of all of the camps fantastic and expansive facilities.

3: It is so easy to choose a camp because there are so many opportunities. There is a camp for every one. So the youngsters have just to choose what camp they would like to be in.

Part II:
In this essay I would like to write about me as a leader in an American summer camp. What can I learn? What could I learn the “campers” of my own experience?

Yes I would like to spend some time to work in an American summer camp. As a leader there is a lot of opportunities to learn much about teenagers. I would like to be a soccer trainer in there camps. I would like to help the young soccer players to get better skills, and generate new tactics. I think it would be were nice to spend some weeks of my summer vacation training soccer and was getting money for it.

Last summer I was trainer in a soccer camp in Nørresundby, where I had 6 great days and I learned the campers new soccer skills and they was very happy. You also learn when you have to be angry because it is important that the campers kno7ws the difference between fun and hard word. I had to make sure that none of my other campers felt slighted in any way. As the week progressed I learned how sometimes I just have to put my foot down and say "no." Sometimes extra attention is not always best for a difficult child. Most importantly, I had an experience in the real world of business that taught me how to stand up for myself and address interpersonal and administrative problems. As I turn towards my future and make life-defining decisions, I look back upon my experiences with my campers for inspiration and direction. I view my upcoming years at university as an opportunity to further use the skills I acquired in running summer soccer camps.

I would like to be a camp leader in the next many years because I love this week with a lot of smaller children’s around me, and I hope I can make many soccer stars in the future.