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Danny Vinyard is a young, new Nazi, and a skinhead. He is intelligent and he goes at high school in the raw and gang ravage quarter at Venice Beach in Los Angeles. He delivers an essay, who congratulates Adolph Hitler’s autobiography, Mein Kampf. It makes his teachers angry and not least the schools black headmaster, Dr. Bob Sweeney, but instead of throwing him out decides the headmaster to give him the last chance to get on better minds. He gives Danny that assignment to write the case story about his big Brother Derek, who is the leader figure and an ideal for the entire comprehensive neo-Nazi gang in the area and especially for Danny, who idolize his big Brother.
    Derek serves a judgment at three year for a brutally murder at two black ones, but his release is approaching, and all in the entire neo-Nazi environment are waiting an exciting re-union with their idol. At the domestically are the brothers family in disbandment. The father is dead, killed by two black junkies, the mother is chronic ill, and the sister is taking heavy distance from theirs extreme opinions and way to live in. A middle-aged new Nazi is like a counsellor and a father figure for both Derek and Danny.
    But when Derek is released, he takes completely distance from his earlier environment and from all his old friends. He turns his back on the neo-Nazism and he also try to convince Danny about, that it is a wrong way, he’s turning into – that the hate and violence doesn’t leads to anything except emptiness.
    Simultaneously with this action we saw a flashback that shows us how Derek’s experiences in prison had influenced and developed him. Here he first comes in a group with other whites, racist prisoners, but when he experience them as false and inconsistent, he takes distance from them, which doesn’t happens unpunished in the hard prison environment. His white fellow prisoners raped him in the shower, without the guard involvement, and he isolate himself after that. In the prisons laundry he works together with a black prisoner, and slowly they develop a kind of a friendship, who for Derek means, that he gets power to get through the rest time of imprisonment.
    It succeeds him to convince Danny about the pointlessness in this way of life, and together they remove all the Nazi-accessories from his room and begin to make it work in the little family. But the old friends don't look positive at Derek’s converting, in the end the past obtains the brothers – at the most violence way.


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