Kontroller engelsk brev for fejl
Hejsa eksperter :O)Jeg har lige lavet dette engelske brev. Er her nogle der gider kontrollere det for div. grammtiske og sproglige fejl? Det ville være lækkert :O)
På forhånd tak
Mvh
xxxHitmanxxx
Dear Sirs
We have noticed your website at www.flashphotoservice.uk, and that is the reason for our application to you. We are a small, newly established web-company. Our special is creating websites, with a creativity and humour for companies and private persons.
We have looked at your website, and we finds it rather boring. Today, as your probably already know, the Internet is evolving like it had done the last decade, and there is only a little, or no room for boring websites in the future. We thinks, a new layout, an animated logo or a competition on your website, could create a greater attraction around your website.
It is special your logo we have looked at, and we have found several good ideas, and suggestions to how your could change this in a humorous way, to make greater attention around your website. Please contact us for a preview, and a detailed explanation of these ideas.
As an extra benefit, in this month, we have a special openings price. Our normal price will be $30 an hour for one of our employees to create a website, but this will of course be a lot cheaper for your, by only $14 an hour, and we can guarantee, that your have the end site only ONE WEEK after we have taken the assignment!
We look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours sincerely
Web-wit
P.J. Proby
