31. marts 2004 - 17:50Der er
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Hjælp til at rette et engelsk brev!
Hey er der nogen der li vil rette det her brev for at se om jeg har fået det hele med? Jeg har læst det igennem 3 gange og kan ikk finde flere fejl!
Dear Solaima, Now I have lived in Denmark for 24 months. And Denmark is a nice country. I live in a little flat in the capital with to girls. In the flat we don’t have carpet on the floors and we don’t have a toilet-/shower- room I’ve got a job as deep pan pizza baker with pizza hut. This job I badly paid but it’s enough to pay the flat rent.
Denmark is a beautiful country, we have many days with sun and no clouds. But of cause we also have rain sometimes. Danish people are very god to speak English, so you can ask them a question and they will answer how fast it’s possible. Since I came to Denmark, now 2 years ago. I have met many new Danish friends.
What is the worst thing with Denmark? I think it’s the traffic because it difficult to understand. In England we drive in left lane, but in Denmark should we drive in right lane. That was my problem in the first 3-4 months. In Denmark they are Christians, in England they are Protestants and Catholics.
I hope you want to come to Denmark, I looking forward to we could buy a flat and live together in long time. I still love you! I miss you very much.
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Dear Solaima, I have now lived in Denmark for 24 months. Denmark is a nice country. I live in a little flat in the capital Copenhagen with to girls. In the flat we don’t have carpet on the floors and we don’t have a rest room I’ve got a job as deep pan pizza baker with Pizza Hut. Thise job I poorly paid but I have enough to pay rent.
Denmark is a beautiful country, we have many clear days with sun and no clouds. We do of course also have rain sometimes. The Danish people speaks English very well, so you can ask them a question and they will answer how fast it’s possible. Since I came to Denmark 2 years ago, I have maid many new Danish friends.
What is the worst thing with Denmark? I think it’s the traffic because it difficult to understand. In England we drive in left lane, but in Denmark we must drive in right lane. That was my problem the first 3-4 months. In Denmark they are Christians, in England they are Protestants and Catholics.
I hope you want to come to Denmark, I am hoping that we might buy a flat and live together for a long time. I still love you and miss you very much.
...baker with pizza hut = Pizza Hut (navne med stort) This job I badly paid = This job is badly paid ..will answer how fast it’s possible = as fast as possible (evt.)
Since I came to Denmark, now 2 years ago. I have met many new Danish friends. = I came to Denmark 2 years ago and have met many new Danish friends.
Dear Solaima, Now I have lived in Denmark for 24 months, and Denmark is a nice country. I live in a little flat in the capital with two girls. In the flat we don’t have carpet on the floors and we don’t have a toilet-/shower- room. I’ve got a job as deep pan pizza baker at Pizza Hut. This job is for a poor salury but it’s enough to pay the flat's rent.
Denmark is a beautiful country, we have many days with sun and no clouds. But ofcourse we also have rain sometimes. Danish people are very good at speaking English, so you can ask them a question and they will answer how fast it’s possible. Since I came to Denmark, now 2 years ago. I have met many new Danish friends.
What is the worst thing with Denmark? I think it’s the traffic because it's difficult to understand. In England we drive in left lane, but in Denmark they drive in right lane. That was my problem in the first 3-4 months. In Denmark they are Christians, in England they are Protestants and Catholics.
I hope you want to come to Denmark, I'm looking forward to we could buy a flat and live together for a long time. I still love you! I miss you very much.
så lige buffer havde svaret *s* men fandt lige nogle yderligere ting.
1 : to girls - two girls, 2: this job I badly paid ?? og buffer *s* thise job I poorly paid kan man heller ikke sige *s* evt. : The/this job is poorly paid 3: ...and they will answer how fast it's possible" hvad mener du med det? den sætning giver ingen mening. 4: it (is) difficult 5: (the) left lane, (the) right lane
et par overset fejl ... (læst udfra buffezones udlæg) * "I live in a little flat ... with _two_ girls..." (ikke to) * "We don't have carpeting in the flat, nor do we have a restroom" * "I've got a job as a "deep pan" pizza baker _at_ Pizza Hut" (ikke with, men at) * "_This_ job is poorly paid but i (do) have enough to pay _the_ rent" (This - simpel stavefejl, do er indsat som forslag til at få sætningen til at flyde bedre, bestemt artikel (the) foran rent" (fortsættes)
he he - måske skulle jeg bare gøre som de andre og skrive hele smørren igen :-))
adema >> salury ==> salery
ofcourse ==> of course
"how fast it's possible" ==> tror at her menes "hurtigst muligt"/"med det samme" eller lign. dvs. at sætningen er "and they will reply immediately"
"Since i came to Denmark, now two years ago" ==> "Since I came to Denmark, two years ago" (drop "now" - det er underforstået i "since")
"Danish friends" ==> "danish friends" (skal ikke være med stort, med mindre det er første ord i en sætning...)
"Christians... Protestants... Catholics" ==> "christians, protestants, catholics" ... - men selve sætningen er forkert, da vi er protestanter i Danmark, og de er anglikanere i England...
"I'm looking forward to we could buy a flat and live together for a long time." ==> "I'm hoping we could buy a flat and live together (for a long time)" (personligt ville jeg udelade "for a long time" - det får det til at lyde som om at det er en afmålt tid, de skal leve sammen...
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