13. april 2004 - 22:49Der er
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Kontrol af engelsk tekst
Hejsa eksperter:O)
Jeg har lige oversat et engelsk brev. Er her ikke en der gider at kigge det igennem for grammatiske fejl?
På forhånd tak :O)
Mvh xxxHitmanxxx
Dear Sirs
Thank you for your application of 22nd February 2001, where you ask us to assist you with establishing contact to young foreign, who would like to work in the USA in the summer period this year.
We have sent your application to our sister organizations in London, Paris, Berlin and Prague and have underlined the importance of that the young people master the English language reasonably good. Our sister organizations, which have contact with a great number of school and universities in the concerned countries, are now working with the case.
Young European are general interested in working in foreign countries, and therefore it will not be a problem to get more students to USA. The young peoples paid work in foreign countries develops their command of a language and gives them experiences, which they can use in their future career.
We look forward to be able to send you applications from about 150 young people and hope the co-operation with the young people also will succeed for you this year.
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"application" er mest en ansøgning, men dit svar tyder mere på at det er et spørgsmål eller en eftelysning i har fået, måske det var bedst blot at kalde det et brev ( "letter" )
"resonalbly good" skal definitivt være "reasonably well".
"Young European are general interested in working in foreign countries, and therefore ..." er noget klumpet. hellere: "Many young Europeans are eager to work abroad, so ..."
Jeg har også et par andre ændringer der ikke er så nemme at forklare, så alt ialt:
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Dear Sirs
Thank you for your letter of 22nd February 2001, where you ask us to assist you with establishing contact with young foreign students, who would like to work in the USA in the summer period this year.
We have sent your passed to our sister organizations in London, Paris, Berlin and Prague and have underlined the importance of the young people mastering the English language reasonably well. Our sister organizations, which have contact with a great number of school and universities in the concerned countries, are now working on it..
Many young Europeans are eager to work abroad, so it will not be a problem to get more students to USA. By working in a foreingn country the young peoples develop their language skills and gain valuable experience and contacts, for use in their future career.
We expect to be able to send you applications from about 150 young people and hope the co-operation with the young people also will be a success this year.
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Men noget helt andet. Har i checket den organisation der skrev ? Hvis ikke så sørg for at gøre det før i tager det ansvar det er at overlade dem andre menneskers børn. De ku være slemmerter der blot ønsker gratis slavearbejde, eller det der er værre.
Takke mange gange for jeres svar. Jeg har ikke lige fået svaret tilbage i lllang tid.
JakobA >> Det var bare en tekst fra handelsskolen. Det er ikke noget jeg havde tænkt mig at gøre :O)
Mvh xxxHitmanxxx
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