21. marts 2007 - 20:58Der er
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Er du god til engelsk?
Er der en venlig sjæl, som evt. er bedre til engelsk end jeg, der vil være venlig at komme med forslag til rettelser, så vil jeg være meget taknemmelig :)
Schizophrenia.
Peter Boyd is a 27-year-old man, which lives by himself. He has not been working the last couple of years. Until then, he worked as a baker, and was providing active support for his friends, whenever they needed him. Peter was hospitalized on psychiatric ward, because he increasingly got depressed within the last two months. He did not answer the phone, and did not open the door, when someone ringed the bell. One day as his father visited him, he found a rope lying about, and Peter admitted that he was thinking of suicide. The father immediately got him hospitalized. Five months earlier Peter was also hospitalized, at the same hospital within a psychotic condition. Thru the prior year, he got more and more withdrawn, and tends to keep apart from others. He told that he had the feeling that his colleagues were talking about him behind his bag. He could not concentrate at work, and often went to the toilet, where he stayed (I lang tid af gangen). Peter was sure that his phone was tapped, and he could here the neighbours at both sites of his apartment talking to him thru the walls. He heard them say things like: we must get rid of him, or he is definitely homosexual. He also experienced that they send electric power, trying to strike his genitals. At that point, Peter only left his apartment after sunset. Short time later he moved to a hotel. Even at the hotel, he could here the neighbours of his apartment talking about him. One night Peter has had enough, and went to the local police station to report about them. The police called Peters father. He said that he had been worried for the sons condition for a while. During the treat at the hospital, Peter got anti-psychotic drugs, and within a month, he recovered that much, that he could be discharged. He continued in outpatient treatment, and was able to handle himself in his apartment with social payment. Still he heard voices, but seemed to understand that it was his disease, and therefore did not take notice of it. He seemed apathetic and unhappy, and spend most of the day, just sitting in his chair and staring out the window. He smoked more cigarettes than ever. Sometimes more than 50 a day. Peter took his medicine and maintained the outpatient treatment.
Støv, fibre og metalliske partikler kan påvirke både uptime, levetid og driftssikkerhed. Derfor arbejder flere datacentre systematisk med contamination control.
Peter Boyd is a 27-year-old man, who lives by himself. He has not been working the last couple of years. Until now, he has worked as a baker and was providing active support for his friends, whenever they needed him. Peter was hospitalized on a psychiatric ward, because he got more and more depressed within the last two months. He did not answer the phone and did not open the door, when someone rang the bell. One day as his father visited him, he found a rope lying around and Peter admitted that he was thinking of suicide. The father immediately got him hospitalized. Five months earlier Peter was also hospitalized, at the same hospital with a psychotic condition. Through the prior year he got more and more withdrawn and tends to keep apart from others. He told that he had the feeling that his colleagues were talking about him behind his back. He could not concentrate at work and often went to the toilet where he stayed for hours. Peter was sure that his phone was tapped and he could hear the neighbours at both sides of his apartment talking to him through the walls. He heard them say things like: we must get rid of him, or he is definitely homosexual. He also experienced that they send electric power, trying to strike his genitals. At that point, Peter only left his apartment after sunset. Short time later he moved to a hotel. Even at the hotel he could here the neighbours of his apartment talking about him. One night Peter had enough and went to the local police station to report the neighbours. The police called Peters father. Peters father said that he had been worried for the sons condition for a while. During the treat at the hospital Peter got anti-psychotic drugs and within a month he recovered enough to get discharged. He continued in outpatient treatment and was able to handle himself in his apartment with social payment. Still he heard voices, but seemed to understand that it was his disease and therefore did not take notice of it. He seemed apathetic and unhappy and spend most of the day just sitting in his chair staring out the window. He smoked more cigarettes than ever. Sometimes he smoked more than 50 cigarettes a day. Peter took his medicine and maintained the outpatient treatment.
Peter Boyd is a 27-year-old man, who lives by himself. He has been unemployed the last couple of years. previously he worked as a baker, and was providing active support for his friends, whenever they needed it. Peter was hospitalized in a psychiatric ward, with a depression that had developed over a period of two month. He had not answered the phone, or opened the door, when someone called or came by. One day when his father visited him, he found a rope lying about, and Peter admitted openly that he was contemplating suicide. The father immediately had him hospitalized. Five months before this Peter was also hospitalized, at the same hospital with a psychotic condition. During the years prior to this , he had been more and more withdrawn, and tended to keep apart from others. He often said that he had the feeling that his colleagues were talking about him behind his bag. He could not concentrate at work, and often went to the toilet, where he stayed for quit some time. Peter was sure that his phone was tapped, and he could hear the neighbors at both sites of his apartment talking to him through the walls. He heard them say things like: "we must get rid of him", or "he is definitely homosexual". He also hallucinated about the neighbors sending in electric power surges, trying to strike him at his genitals. At that point, Peter only left his apartment after sunset. A short time later he moved to a hotel. Even at the hotel, he could here the neighbors back at his apartment talking about him. One night Peter had had enough, and went to the local police station to report them. The police called Peters father. He said that he had been worried about his sons condition for a while. During his stay at the hospital, Peter was on anti-psychotic drugs, and within a month, he recovered so much, that he could be discharged. He continued in outpatient treatment, and was able to handle himself in his apartment with social benefits. Still he hears voices, but seems to understand that it ishis condition, and therefore he does not take notice of it. He seems apathetic and unhappy, and spend most of the day, just sitting in his chair, staring out the window. He smoks more cigarettes than ever. Sometimes more than 50 a day. Peter takes his medicine and maintains the outpatient treatment.
I skriver begge: "to be continued", men det er bevidst at jeg valgte at skrive could be continued .... dvs. historien fortsætter ikke, men det kunne den sagtens :)
Nå, da jeg i høj grad har benyttet mig af det bufferzone har skrevet, har jeg valgt ikke at fordele pointene lige ... håber ikke der bliver nogen sure miner.
Vores engelsklærer siger blot til os (som en tommelfingerregel): Hvis i er i tvivl, om der skal være komma, så lad være med at sætte et.
Michael :-)
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22. marts 2007 - 17:10#17
@foxmulder58: "And" er ganske rigtigt en konjunktion og kan dermed stå mellem 2 helsætninger, og så skal der være komma. Der mangler således et komma i denne: "During the treat at the hospital Peter got anti-psychotic drugs (komma) and within a month he recovered enough to get discharged".
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